I returned your rough drafts with lots of feedback.
No second person: YOU
Do not use VERY, REALLY, COOL, NEAT, DIFFERENT, INTERESTING, BAD, GOOD, NICE
Instead, find a word that describes it better!
Instead of clichés, (for example: the news was not going to be good / a sinking feeling / butterflies in the stomach)
describe what it feels like to you.
We worked in the lab today on the Creation Myth Project.
HW - MLA draft, along with all pre-writes, edits, and rough draft, is due next Wednesday.
Your project (Wednesday's post) is due Thursday, next week.